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Intent

Mysteries unfold
as mind's eye
opens
clarity
perception
belief
power

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  • Shahrazad
    May 5, 2008

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    I read this several times and I could it a little too vague. If you could clarify this better I think it would have a more powerful effect on the reader.

    Thanks for giving it a whirl! Thanks for entering!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    A Lot said in 10 words!! Well Done & Best of Luck in the Contest!


  • Fourthaxis
    April 29, 2008

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    Quite!

    Nailed it! Amazingly perceptive description of intent Beautiful form, as the words are read the feelings flower inside of you! Great write!