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One Dark and Lonely

One Dark and Lonely night
I met her
In the pattering rain
she stod
Wet hair
Wet face
Wet lips
Wet breast
Dripping Wet
My Heart cried
"She is just gonna cach a cold!"

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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    May 2, 2008
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    hahahaha

    this is really lovely!! I had a good laugh!

    Thank you for submitting this poem!


  • PoeticAlien gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    I don't think my poetry is any cooler than yours,

    yours is yours,
    and mine is mine.


    all poetry is unique and beautiful.

    as is this poem.