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Bloody Love

Your kisses blind me
Your touch engulfs me with fire
Your manners impeccable
The way you wear your heart on your sleeve
Never losing thought of what I would like
What you are has no say in my feelings
How you turn the white to beautiful crimson
Your love cancels out the unimportant
And leaves me dazed

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  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    May 8, 2008

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    WoW and all that leaves you dazed.
    This was a great piece.
    I enjoyed your poem.

    loveandblessings2u & yours alwawys
    Joyce

    good luck in my contest.