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Missing image
I found myself
on the deathbed
of his emotions

whispering desire
he will never hear...

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 4, 2008

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    Great word choices for a powerful/understated write.
    So well done as usual.
    Congratulations on the HM.
    Marlene

  • phoenixonfire
    May 4, 2008

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    That cracked my heart! So simple yet so painfully adorned with beauty! I love this!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

    pri


  • In Too Deep1
    April 29, 2008

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    This is prime penning. There is so much emotion and depth in these words. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    Ahhh... sometimes hearts won't hear what we want to whisper to them... I know this well.

    This is another amazing write with such depth to it


  • Phlegm
    April 29, 2008

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    Wow. This is amazing. Such awesome imagery. When I read this, I imagine a woman who had just had a one night stand but after that night, wants more but he won't hear her pleas.

    Great job, and good luck in the contest!

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