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Glass Heart (15 words)

Missing image

Words of ardor

spoken
from deceiting lips.

Claiming my heart
of glass for your
decorations.

Author notes

Prompt- The picture above.

A contest entry

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Comments


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 4

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    Nice, the fragile delicate heart as a decoration. Well done.
    Congratulations on the HM.
    Marlene

  • phoenixonfire
    May 4

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    What a wording and how marvellously they have been placed to make a beautiful piece! Excellent work!!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

    pri

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    April 29

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    Very beautifully written sis!
    Lovely work here as always.
    All the best to you with this
    piece and keep it up!




    Jeremy0826


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    April 29

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    piercing and anguishing ....

    loved it so dark and revealing, it's message pierced
    our hearts.
    What a great poem for this prompt!
    well done poetess, well done!
    ears/Seattle