Time has come.
Cage door opens after so much time,
liberty
finally
felt.
You hold my hand, I learn to fly.
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A contest entry
- Let's go Quickie Crazy!!!!!! by kiwigirljacks.
550 points, ended April 29, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oooohhh.... very nifty! I love this one. Cool structure, too. Nicely done!
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Thanx..Had some fun with the structure , like doing that every once in a while
Cin
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Ohhhhhh......Excellent imagery!!! Your last line was just beautiful!! We all need that special someone don't we??? Best of luck here
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yes we do
Thank you
Cin
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I love the fact that someone is holding her hand and helping her to fly!! I think we all need a friend or someone who believes in us to do that... wonderful
Thanks
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yep thats exactly how I saw it...like we can be given the freedom we need, but sometimes we still need a hand to hold, just for a little while
Great contest SiS
Glad I could participate
Cin
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This was a really interesting take on the prompt! I really enjoyed it!.. Bravo, best of luck to you.
Angel
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Thank you so much
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your welcome? lol.
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