Do me-
Now.
Like I had
a choice.
You cannot
break me
if I concede.
.
Author notes
Photo Prompt
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE... by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended May 4, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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dark..lovely....amazing
mylee -
Powerful and deep, darkly and seductive


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Wow, you do call it as you see them... lots of strength in your wording.
Nicely done from the dark edge. Congratulations on the silver.
Marlene -
Hits the core...wonderful!! I love this extremely!!! Its jst so grasping!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
pri
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short, yes. simple, no. oh so good. strong emotions unleashed in a fast burst of wind. love the ending.

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This has an incredible punch to it. I was knocked over and left with a chill. Dark and gritty. I love it.
CaliOkie

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oooooh! Such prisons should not exist, but that is one way out... A super response to the picture prompt. ~K


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