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Vacant

Do me-

    Now.

Like I had

        a choice.

You cannot

      break me

if I concede.

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Photo Prompt

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A contest entry

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  • movedon
    May 18, 2008
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    dark..lovely....amazing

    mylee


  • She burns
    May 6, 2008
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    Powerful and deep, darkly and seductive


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 4, 2008

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    Wow, you do call it as you see them... lots of strength in your wording.
    Nicely done from the dark edge. Congratulations on the silver.

    Marlene

  • phoenixonfire
    May 4, 2008

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    Hits the core...wonderful!! I love this extremely!!! Its jst so grasping!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

    pri

  • myacidwords
    May 3, 2008

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    short, yes. simple, no. oh so good. strong emotions unleashed in a fast burst of wind. love the ending.


  • CaliOkie silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    This has an incredible punch to it. I was knocked over and left with a chill. Dark and gritty. I love it.

    CaliOkie


  • klassy lassy
    April 29, 2008

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    oooooh! Such prisons should not exist, but that is one way out... A super response to the picture prompt. ~K

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