I hurt you
I feel bad
But now I know
I know somethings wrong
You wont tell me
I feel so left out
I'm glad there are others
People you trust more
I feel so lost now
Now that I feel you slipping away
Do you realize
What your doing to me
Do you realize
How confused I am
I don't think you do
Have you really pushed me that far away
Am I a ghost to you now
Or am I even there
I don't think you even know
How hurt I am
Or how lonely I feel
Maybe one day
The one day neither of us are around
You'll know the truth
About me
Author notes
This poem is to people who don't realize what I'm going through or how confused at the heart I am. Like mentioned "The one day neither of us are around" was to point out to a person I care about that maybe he would realize I was there and he never wanted to see it.
A contest entry
- BACK FOR ANOTHER TRY by Tempa Lee.
600 points, ended May 11, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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nice. i thought it was pretty cool how ya structurized it.
this is about trust, right? i hear its the easiest thing to lose and the hardest thing to get back.
you do good. mongo congratulate you.
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hey this is Dani...the judge of the contest. just to let you know that i do not know who you are...so if you know me please don't be upset if i leave you a comment that does not make you smile. it's just i'm judging this contest and i wanna be able to seek out the good and get rid of the bad. i liked reading this poem because you express yourself very well. i can relate to it because some people are just selfish and will hold a grudge for so long and once that person is gone...everything goes with that person. but i really liked this. keep it up and best of luck to you in this contest.
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aww this is sad
but somtimes the ones we love cant see that fact
sometimes it feels like we have to bash them over the head with it..
i hope its worked out now sweety if not dont give up hope -
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thanks...everything has worked out...im glad too...once again thank you
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