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Beautifull Stone.

Lifes beauty
In this sorrowful shell
Loves enchantress
With a heart made of
Beautiful stone..

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prompt: Picture.
title is: Sad_and_lonely_by_Papou
Words: 15

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  • phoenixonfire
    May 4, 2008

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    What an imagery! I love the wording and the refrence here! It is so delicate and heavenly! A typo in the title of the poem I think

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

    pri


  • Swangrnv gold member
    April 30, 2008
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    wow

    this is beautiful and the pic. compliments the write nicely!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    This is a great piece sweety very nicley penned goodluck in the contest much love always


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    Ahhh.. what an fantastic write!! Your imagery in this is fantastic sis!! I feel ya....

    Brilliant


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    April 28, 2008

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    wow

    I have met women like this, beautiful with a heart of stone. You are not that way. You are beautiful and sweet and I adore you lots, Daddy

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