Lifes beauty
In this sorrowful shell
Loves enchantress
With a heart made of
Beautiful stone..
Author notes
prompt: Picture.
title is: Sad_and_lonely_by_Papou
Words: 15
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE... by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended May 4, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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What an imagery! I love the wording and the refrence here! It is so delicate and heavenly! A typo in the title of the poem I think

Thanks for entering and good luck!
pri
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wow
this is beautiful and the pic. compliments the write nicely!

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thank you very much. I'm glad that you liked it.
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This is a great piece sweety very nicley penned goodluck in the contest much love always


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Thank you Tia!! I'm glad that you liked it..

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Ahhh.. what an fantastic write!! Your imagery in this is fantastic sis!! I feel ya....
Brilliant


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wow
I have met women like this, beautiful with a heart of stone.
You are not that way. You are beautiful and sweet and I adore you lots, Daddy


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