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Allowance

Myriads of backstabs
Broken hopes
Life goes on
And endurance
Disallowing the progress
Of suicide.

Author notes

I don't know the name of the picture which was used as a prompt.

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  • phoenixonfire
    May 4

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    I love these lines! They have an internal message so well drafted with the use of emotions! Wonderfully penned!!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

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