Heart on my sleeve
My emotions wont leave
Eyes look the other way
Shameful diguise
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE... by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended May 4, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow
I'm honestly not a fan of short pieces. But i can say that if I read more like this i would be. very beautiful. -
Very Nice
Oh man I really love that picture you posted with this poem., this reminds me so much of my Sweetems of a friend and yes I nicknasmed her that name because she is a sweet and she lives in England it rolls off my tongue funny
any ways really liked how you weote this poem too. love the depth and quality through out this poem of yours. its amazing how deep writing can get when you are on a poetic hight. any ways keep up the good work 
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simply elegant. i love this. good luck and best wishes
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This is way too beautiful! It is so simple and yet so thought provoking! I love the phrase shameful disguise!!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
pri
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the picture was a great combination of emotion. Simple and sweet. lovely
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Very Nice Best of luck to you in the contest!
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Another WOW! hunni.
Brillance in just a few lines
Best of luck
♥
Stay safe
Love ya
~Manda
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