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a natural course

anticipating advances ~

the strings of my heart
already tied up in you,

~ I slowly unwind

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  • phoenixonfire
    May 4, 2008

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    WOW! The wording just catches on to me...very deep and so intricate esp the last line....so soothingly powerful!!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

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