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Proof

born into the world
only by passing
through pain
these afflictions
remind me

I'm alive

In a list

A contest entry

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 4, 2008

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    And that everything is not fair, that sometimes you win and sometimes you don't... oops, I digress, see it got me going.
    I like your take on this with passing through pain.
    Marlene

  • phoenixonfire
    April 29, 2008

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    very creative and smooth..there is lot of pain here that comes to me in a really simple yet emotional way! Well done! and it should be reminds me not reminders me...!!

    Thanks for entering!
    Good luck!
    pri


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    Nice one. umm you forgot the "h" in through though Good luck with this if it isn't judged yet Sis


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    Very nice take on the picture. All the best in the contest with it


  • Heavens Child
    April 29, 2008

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    So true, sometimes we know we are alive because of the pain we experience as sad as that is. Best of luck to you in the contest.

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