Lying here alone
dreaming of you
hoping for your love
as I surrender my heart
Author notes
15 Words
Picture Prompt
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE... by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended May 4, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice take with surrendering your heart.
Marlene -
That was really minute and tender! There is so much passion and longing in this work! Very well put!
Thanks for entering!
Good luck!
pri
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Wow very nice, so much said in so few words. All the best in the contest with it
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You wrap up so much passion in a few words...
Your poetry should be carried in every girl's pocket. 
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well penned here Jer. I loved where you took it. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Tory
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