Existence,
becomes unique,
mimicking intelligence
infesting ripples,
from core of the world,
spitting seeds
fermenting,
into mental beings.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture Prompt
Artist Unknown
A contest entry
- Contest of the Shorts! by Shahrazad.
450 points, ended May 6, 2008, 20 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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It wasn't required to do a picture prompt with the apple (it was more there for decoration) but a few people drew inspiration from it anyways and came up with some great poems.
This one is probably one of my favorites of the apple poems though... I loved so many lines...
I like how this was philosophical too... argueing that existance mimicks intelligence
I liked the "core of the world, spitting seeds, fermenting, into mental beings" you really ran with the apple metaphor and it worked beautifully when talking about the world and humanity.
Beautiful and clever poem. Loved it. Thanks for entering the contest! -
Great take on the picture prompt. Good Luck. Juls
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Now this is a creative take on the prompt!! Your work holds so much depth... I think you are a philosopher at heart!
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Excellent take on the picture!--Well Done & Best of Luck in the Contest!
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huh. interesting and spare. more high-brow than most of the stuff on this site, and more thought-provoking. well done.
and i'm glad you're a thinker! i assume that means you like philosophy, and if so, i'd very much appreciate it if you'd chat with me
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