Windows of time refine.
Air out the closed in mind.
Wave after wave it paves,
for the reprisal stage.
A contest entry
- Contest of the Shorts! by Shahrazad.
450 points, ended May 6, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I liked the bit about the "closed in mind"... really cool take... I liked the air imagery a lot.
Lovely poem- thanks for the read! -
Good flow of the rhyming verse!--Well Done & Best of Luck in the Contest!
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a good poem, aye let the wind in so it can blow the thoughts about, and give them some motion, dance like.
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Yeslol
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oh, i love every line of this! and its a wonderful poem as a whole...great read
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Thankslol
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