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Equal







Sapphire feeds
    everlasting symphony
                Then,
  shattering.


~a child cries in hunger~
      And equality smiles.







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  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    Excellent

    Briliiant take on the prompt.
    Wonderful choice of vacabulary as always
    Great thinking "outside the box"
    Conrads on the Gold
    Well deserved

    many blessings
    David


  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    April 29, 2008
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    This is truly wonderful and metaphorically deep... x


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 28, 2008

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    WOW! How wonderful and so very true with depth and sadness of what is...great metaphor and imagery...a pleasure to read...best to you!