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tiny sliver

a tiny sliver

observed
under the microscope

my life

details

amplified
elevated... enlarged
and enhanced

yet distorted

in your eyes

 

 

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  • Shahrazad
    May 5, 2008

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    I LOVED the last two lines... their really amplified this poem. IT holds a lot of depth and truth... This is defiantely a powerful little poem. Cool you used the microscope metaphor... clever.

    Thanks for entering the contest!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 29, 2008
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    Very Very Well Written and versed and Best of Luck in the Contest!