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♥Between our Hearts♥

i prayed one night for a someone like you,
who can help me ease the loneliness in my heart.
for my heart has stopped beating for a while,
i am blessed for God has sent you in my life.

i didn't expect you will be sent in this way,
so far in a way but near in our hearts.
we just met in the middle of two corners,
and has seen our faces over the world wide web.

the first time i saw the smile on your face,
how happy my heart and smiling inside.
we did find ways to connect our hearts often,
everyday as much as possible it may seem.

the very first second that i've heard your voice,
how bright my soul glowing inside and out.
for i am hearing a voice of a far angel,
sent by God to share with me the meaning of love.

two hearts far apart and two hearts connected,
how high i can fly loving you with all my heart.
the morning message and the sweet thoughts,
brings more colors in this colorful life.

whenever i think that i may loose you,
having this distance between ourselves.
i just hold on to the vows of our hearts,
locked by the love felt in our ways.

in God's time i know our eyes will meet,
hug and kisses to you i will give.
the longing of your soft palm and sweet touch,
increases my love for you day by day.

i know in my heart you are sent for me,
no doubts with trust i give to you my angel.
no lie with faithfulness i offer you my baby,
no i can't afford to loose an angel i heart the most.

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4)Internet love;never met them in person but know in your heart you love them?

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  • Dixie Dawn gold member
    June 24

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    I adore this! My favorite part:

    whenever i think that i may loose you,
    having this distance between ourselves.
    i just hold on to the vows of our hearts,
    locked by the love felt in our ways.

    its perfect, thank you for sharing you..


  • Antebellum
    March 26
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    beautifully written. very sweet.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 18, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • unavailable
    September 18, 2008

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    no lie with faithfulness i offer you my baby,
    no i can't afford to loose an angel i heart the most.

    I think this is sweet.


  • Breaking Inside
    May 16, 2008

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    this is very beautiful (even more so now that you fixed the errors) thank you for entering, i really enjoyed this poem

  • piccola silver member
    May 14, 2008

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    this poem shows deep feeling, but there are a lot of mistakes that take away from that. There are spelling errors that spell-check cannot find; such as the use of the word pray in the very 1st line. It should be prayed then in line 3 it says your heart stop beating and it should say stopped beating. I found quite a few errors like that. But I did get the feeling of love and that's always nice. Thank you for entering.


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    May 5, 2008
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    A very good poem. Sweet and really covering what one ahs to deal with in a long distance relationship. There are a few spots the the flow of the poem seems to be thrown off but they arent really noticable and with freeverse its not required that the flow be perfect. Thanks for the entry and good luck in my contest.


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    April 29, 2008

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    Wonderful poem ! so beautiful & sweet, i loved it, thanks for entering it in my contest take care and good luck !

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