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Mellow Dreams

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Far away in a secret-kept land
a flower is in psychedelic bloom
This mental trip is extravagantly
adorned with lava lamp-lights
and a plethora of images far
beyond anything, that the
human mind could ever devise
or comprehend in this world...

...Mellow dreams, Day Tripper


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Artist Unknown...Sorry
Image name is: Lotus Omega

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  • The Rainbows Mind
    May 9, 2008

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    This was indeed a very intriguing piece. Not many can actually accomplish a point in such a short time. However, you managed. It leaves the reader with thoughts to mall over.


  • Desire gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Mellow Dreams:
    This piece tugged at Spirit and I normally read
    verses several times within the contest~
    while inhaling Your Voice, the first thought for
    some reason was unique...
    I just read the first few lines and was grabbed
    with that word also being shown that You have
    so much Creativity~ buried within...I'm getting words:
    buried within...they need to come out...Success!
    It feels like Your full potential locked within a
    closet...and was hearing: father holds the key.
    Now that can be taken in any context...
    either for ex: holding You back...fear of failure,
    not feeling good enough...etc...different ways to
    take it~ was shown: V...which looked like
    Vancouver...
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    This mental trip is extravagantly
    adorned with lava lamp-lights

    Beautiful take on the prompt~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • JinSays gold member
    April 28, 2008

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    Ohmyfriennnnnnnd, this is SUPERB...absolutely THERE...

    Yeah, that pic is fabulous..who's contest..? Desire. YES.
    She always finds something different and inspiring. I love everything about this write. I think what I like most, is that you could have gone really deep with the use of psychotropic here,and you didn't. That shows a maturity that is refreshing, and admirable...right on.
    Two thumbs up, annd best wishes. Always,
    Jin


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    April 28, 2008

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    My first impression is "Whoaaaah Tryppy!" Sweet pic with an awesome poem! *Wish you luck in the contest!*