Calm and reason
have found
their way to
my soul
once again,
a contented
sigh and the
flutters of angels
wings as I
hold and cherish
the rock of my
being my sun
and winged moon
my angel grey
Two pieces that
are the other half
of my being and
soul-
treasured and
whole,
and
I finally
feel I
can breathe
again-
In a list
A contest entry
- Contentment by z etoile.
300 points, ended July 15, 2008, 23 entries
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Comments
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Great job with this piece and thank you for entering the contest.
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Great job with this piece and thank you for entering the contest.
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breathe...
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I fixed,,,, couldn't decide if it was supposed to have the "e" or not...lol.. -
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oh, i wasn't correcting you...
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well it still needed fixed..
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Nice
Good stream-of-consciousness poetry. One spelling mistake - bing should be being? Nice repetition of soul and being and again.
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thanks for the heads up.. I always seem to miss at least one.. but thank you for reading.
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Take a deep breath and breathe in that air of contentment. I am glad you have found it at last. A great write. Keep the ink flowing. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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thanks Donna,
breath it in as much as I can..
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