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Contentment Found

Calm and reason
have found
their way to
my soul
once again,
a contented
sigh and the
flutters of angels
wings as I
hold and cherish
the rock of my
being my sun
and winged moon
my angel grey

Two pieces that
are the other half
of my being and
soul-
treasured and
whole,
and
I finally
feel I
can breathe
again-

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  • a dozenglassroses
    July 11
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    Great job with this piece and thank you for entering the contest.

  • a dozenglassroses
    July 11
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    Great job with this piece and thank you for entering the contest.

  • LionessK Greeters member
    April 30

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    breathe...



  • approachingdrizzle
    April 30

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    Nice

    Good stream-of-consciousness poetry. One spelling mistake - bing should be being? Nice repetition of soul and being and again.


    • greyhaime silver member
      April 30
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      thanks for the heads up.. I always seem to miss at least one.. but thank you for reading.

  • BluRosePoet8488
    April 29

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    Take a deep breath and breathe in that air of contentment. I am glad you have found it at last. A great write. Keep the ink flowing. Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~

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