Scared.
Blood-curdling
words
quash my soul
as eyes grow sightless
to your inflicting swings.
Dispensing of this pain impossible
freedom unattainable.
Once was a time I could,
I could do anything.
But
reaching out to helping arms
comes no more.
There’s only me
scared and silent….
Author notes
Tis probably a load of crap compared to rest of entries but oh well lol
and it;s not based on true facts either...only made up
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I think this was written to great effect, Cindy, and a strong use of the picture prompt. It certainly gave me the chills! I missed this contest but am somewhat glad I did not enter... I have been leaning heavy on the dark side these last few nights and should probably shower myself with a little of the bright light to balance things out. Enough about me, though! This really was a strong piece. It showed once again how well you can write to the prompt, without getting stuck in one track. Good work!
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I do love my prompts
And yes remember to shower yourslef in some light, I remind myself to..to not get stuck into dark or one particular genre etc
Cin
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Well I don't think that it is a load of crap at all since at one time I did live thsi existence and have had this nightmare not only in my sleep but while awake as well.....A very personal write that hit close to home!! Truly a nightmare!!! Excellently done and thank you so much for entering...
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aw I think its awful you did live like this.
Specially cause I havent experience it...Nor would I want to of course, I wouldnt wish it upon my worst enemy.
Thanks for encourging something outta me lol
Cindy
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*sniff* sad sis!! I have so been there and repressed until my soul was silent!
It's not a load of crap at all.. it's brilliant!
Well done for the prompt!
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Thanx SiS..I know repressing, maybe not from this exctly but I know it lol
Cin
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Don't feel that way, when you think like that you often doom yourself to fail. You did a great job with this piece, and the feeling is there, whether real or not it's their.
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heheh i was too
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well i thought i was then it didnt come how i thought it would but oh well..still enjoy digging depe for what i got
Thanks
Cin
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