Hold your tongue Darling,
because everything you say-
can and will be used against you.
On the Seventh day,
the seventh nigh-
That's when the poison will be delivered.
Your heart will begin to fade
your mind begin to go-
It was my greatest concoction.
Ephemeral dreams may get you through the night
but when day breaks-
They'll be nothing left but me.
A contest entry
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Comments
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this seems somewhat scarey to me.
It's like watch out because you're not the one to mess with. Great writing.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
good luck in my contest. -
This is both sinister and wondeful! I just feel like these are the thoughts of the ultimate villian. I don't know if that's where you were going with this but it was a fantastic read. Good job!
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