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Torn Horizons

Confusions,
     one beneath seas,
          another above stars

mind's conflict
     pulling me...
          away from my heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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prompt: Picture prompt

Image painted by Vladimir Kush

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    I think you penned my heart in these few words... this is exactly where I stand in my life right now!

    This is simply amazing!!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 29, 2008
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    So relative and meaningful... x


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 28, 2008

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    awww wow, this is sooo beautiful, wonderful write and good luck in the contest
    takecare

    stephanie


  • crimsondew
    April 28, 2008
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    Conflict expressed with wonderful imagery..All the best!