We are holes in a cosmic coat
life stares us down
like a deranged scientist
Author notes
15 words. a contest write.
written on april 28 2008
In a list
A contest entry
- Surreal Illusion # 10 ~ Star Target by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended April 29, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
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100th HoodWink
Great write give me something to think about. Congratulations on gold.
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wow honey, this is amazing! Congratulations on the trophy, it was certainly very well deserved 
I love the imagery, especially the last line - it kind of made me think of that 'mad scientists' stereotype 
I'm just sorry I didn't see this sooner!
Keep writing!
Polly
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Is anyone supposed to be able to write so well???
I love the daring imagery in this... it's just so original, so brave. I love this so very much.
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stunning. <3
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thanks so much!
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So cool ~ immensely grasping and totally creative... x
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thanks so much for the comment and for the gold!
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ooohhhhh...i really really like this, its awesome.great metaphor and good luck
take care
stephanie
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thanks!
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Well Done!
An interesting angle on the picture...get sine to think...
All the best!
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thanks!
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