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Break My Heart In Two

I can't tell you when it all began,
cause I don't truly remember.
It happened over a period of years,
fast and almost invisible to see.
I used to be everyones little girl,
the one who was always there.
The sweet and lovable one,
one who seemed to care.

Then things started getting tough,
I had no room to breathe.
My perfect world, no longer whole.
My laugh and love you stole.

A new life born in the pain.
Overrun by lies and shame.
So paint my roses black and blue,
call me what you like.
Cause in the end it was you,
who broke my heart in two.

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  • Confuzzled1
    April 29, 2008
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    I liked this it's very nice yay!!!!!


  • Danneh
    April 28, 2008

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    hmm, I normally don't like this type of poem. It seems immature in style and the way you did the title irks me. But actually reading it, I was suprised. Though on a overused topic.... It's not that bad, decent really.

    -Danneh<3