Tis not weight
but the endurance
that breaks hearts;
And only memoirs
will carry
tragedy.
Author notes
15 amazing words
Prompt ~ The picture above
painted by Vladimir Kush
A contest entry
- Surreal Illusion # 11 ~ Pros and Cons by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended April 29, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congrats on silver...
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Deeply expressive and captivating... x
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Very excellent work...so wonderfully creative and deep...truly well done in fifteen word...great job...
Best to you!
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Very original piece. loved it!
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Excellent
Brilliant take on the prompt
Very unique, very well penned
Wish you the best of luck
Many blessings
David
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thanks
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This is an amazing take on the prompt! Loved the flow and message. Best wishes in the comp
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This is interesting, some good points here...endurance does take it's toll...I say it is all about how you endure and balance that life is all about...I like it...
Best of wishes again for the contest...
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All the best.
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