Blinded by science
life lays around
hid feet
forever gazing
heavenward
life's forgotten...
...stargazer
Author notes
Prompt ~ The picture above
painted by Vladimir Kush
A contest entry
- Surreal Illusion # 10 ~ Star Target by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended April 29, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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just lovely... x
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The passion of a stargazer is clear in this write..Well done..All the best!
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I wanna be a stargazer
This is great! There is something in this that I found quite soothing tonight, with tap, tap, tapping of the rain...
Great job!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nevermore~
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ooohhh, great write daddy
great flow to
wonderful job and good luck
hehehe, we are both in it
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thank you baby...where you been me and mom missed you?
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gosh you just had to mae this bright red eh?
where have i been...on and off, pissed off, talking to tony, being tired..idk...making a sanwhich then eating it...yeah idk...im about to pass out and i have a hike tommorow...
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