Tonight,
stars fall
grasping humanity.
And this life
[outlived]
will again,
flood hope
to dream.
Author notes
15 amazing words
Prompt ~ The picture above
painted by Vladimir Kush
A contest entry
- Surreal Illusion # 10 ~ Star Target by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended April 29, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very pretty verse for such a short one. Very well done,
Evan
P.S.: Using this in my BG for your contest
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thanks
ill use the bg on here then
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i really like the story you told using so few words. great write and congratulations on the HM!
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This is just beautiful... x
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