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Love Flowing

Your whip

thrashing

my body.


Crimson

flows from

Masters love.

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This is my ten words of torture, I thought it would be fun to come up with something

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  • untitled.
    July 28, 2008

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    Pleasure and pain, nothing better, ^_^

    Ah, finally: life from the Mistress Rose, ^_^. So glad to see you writing again, my friend. And what a beautiful piece it is. Simple, yet enthralling with the images it brings to mind. *wishes Her slavey was here to reminisce* =P Thanks so much for sharing such a heart-felt write; with love in every lashing, ^_^. Love this. Hope to see more. And thanks for the acceptance into the group!! Made my night, . Hoping you and your loved ones are well, cheri. Toodles.

    ~Fleur


    • Mistress Rose silver member
      July 29, 2008
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      LOL.... Master Ktulu was running a challenge and part of it was to come up with 10 words of torture so we challenged all the judges to do the same. Unfortunitly I still don't seem to have it in me to write, I wish I did. My life is so busy that I just don't have the time anymore, at the end of my day I just want to go to sleep. I hope some day to sit down and write more chapters to my forbbiden adventures. It was nice to hear from you and welcome to the group


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    April 29, 2008
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    oops i forgot these

  • Master Ktulu silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    [kneels and bows before Mistress]

    yes i have been beat, and i take my defeat from you Mistress.

    This was very well done.

    ~Love Your loving slave~

    ktulu


  • Dragonsong silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    oooh.. very nicely done. OK i soo need to get to Mistress for a taste of her whip right now!

    Naids


  • Corvus Corone
    April 29, 2008
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    Harsh but with the grace and elegance of the female touch, nice write Rose.


  • Tattboyspet
    April 29, 2008

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    LOVELY!!!
    Spelling/grammar/punctuation = 20
    Presention/crea .....
    lol!
    I thought you nailed this one to the wall!!! (no pun intended here!)
    EXCELLENT!!!!!!!


  • Lexie - gold member
    April 29, 2008
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    Ooooo

    i love this
    eligantly done with style!
    HOTT!!

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