Ripping, tearing intensely through my core.
Depression and agony devouring my delight,
remnant no longer, the woman in flight.
(C) Nichole A. Dustin
4/28/2008
Author notes
Prompt: 3 Lines. A low time of my depression. Where it feels there's no way up.
My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*
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"Weekend Hugs"
Here is a big hug for you, I miss you so much. I pray for you and your family each day. I know how depression can rule and run your life, I wish there was a magic wand we could wave to make it go away. Your poem is so true to life. Thanks for sharing my friend. Please know how much I care. Sending bunches of hugs and love your way, Theresa
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Wow!!! Love this...
So much power in so few words...
Way to channel that darkness, you weild it well...
Intense, raw, compelling & profound...
Well done!!!
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Oh, hon... This is eating me up. God, I can so relate to those feelings. It has got to get better from here. I love you, my sweet friend!
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I'm sorry that you are sad.
Good luck
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