Little hands dance across the plains of my face
Small features shine with a tiny dimpled smile
Caressing my heart with warm tenderness
I place gentle kisses on smooth, flawless skin
And sigh inside as my emotions gather,
Overflowing, my spirit is filled to the brim
With love unconditional bursting within
Delight overwhelms and your beauty overtakes
So pure and untarnished so honest and true
Only joy could reside in one such as you.
A contest entry
- ~* Let Love In *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended May 2, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold III - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended May 3, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a wonderful poem. Such gorgeous imagery. Well deserved trophies
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This is beautiful. Wonderful imagery, it deserved the trophies!
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Thank You!!
Wonderful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: My Gift
This piece tugged at Spirit and swelled the eyes
for while I was reading...
Being shown a baby bird...
and You nurturing this fledgling...
Seeing an egg...but feels like a reference to
fragile...
Now hearing words: Ashes cast out to sea...
and seeing a picture of some sort ...
the wind carrying it away
I'm being shown the picture of Baby Grace...
the little girl murdered
hearing word: connection....either facial features
or age...
hearing words: Best Mommy in the World...
Touching images to bring tears
These lines grabbed and pulled~
Little hands dance across the plains of my face
Small features shine with a tiny dimpled smile :
Beautiful take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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