sitting inside
as the rain falls
two bestfriends
together their minds wander far
discovering new feelings in their hearts
just bestfrinds
or high school sweethearts
they cant tell
its too hard
the others smile
the others eyes
oh my gosh
how will they tell
as he gets brave
he leans in for the kiss
they both figured out the answer really quick
umm complicated haha
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great
wow,i loved this.
especially the ending. and i mus agree with the guy below me, innocence is the best.
keep up the great work!
woo woo!
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intriguing
i like it
innocence and love
then i sense something more
wondering in imagination
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thank you so much for the comment :]
and yes innocent love is the purest most beautitul part of love
that is kinda actually how my best friend and her fiance got together.
i just tweaked it a lil bit :]
*ajayy
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Sometimes it comes down to not wanting to ruin a good friendship, for if
things don't work out it can turn to hate so some don't want to run the
risk of losing that friend. If it does work out then it's great, because you
already have that base as a freindship already built. Affairs of the heart always run some risk, but like the old saying goes...
"Better to have loved and lost, then never to have loved at all."
-Eddy
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thanks for the comment btw :]
i guess this is complicated mainly cuz i figured this out
and he actually died :[
he passed away last november. he was my bestfriend since i was 2 and i
have so poem written about it if you wanna check those out.
they are the sad ones about micheal.
but yea im just kinda giving up right now. i dont see the point in falling
in love again and then feeling the pain of loosing someone and i def
dont want to loose a 4th friend that would suck.
but anywho thank you for commenting my poem it means a lot :]
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I'm sorry about your loss. It's never easy losing someone close to us. We are blessed
for having them in our lives however short the time may be for we are changed
forever with every meeting we have.
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lol
i really liked it btw you should read some of my new ones i just posted me and XxXspeakXxX broke up so this is a hard time for me and ill be posting allot more soon... -
huny bunch that is amazaing i love it... who is it about? i know you too well... SPILL!!!
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aw this is a sweet poem.
And probably the truth in many people's cases.
nicely done!
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Amazing!
Oh my God, if only real life could be like that!
For the rest of us, atleast 
Life would be so much easier. Beautifully done!
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thanks im glad you enjoyed
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wow i really like this poem. its one of the best i read so far. i like it.
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aww thanks im glad you liked it
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