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a small dream

your always on my mind
its unexplainable to why

my love for you runs so deep and wide
hoping that one day you will be here by myside

holding my hand
maybe a promise ring band

a kiss on the cheek
would make my knees go weak

telling me how much you care
you tell me "baby i love you i ill never leave i swear"

for that day came
down on one knee
he finally fell in love with me

idk just a weird dream i had

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  • cLaSsiX
    March 4
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    good rhyme. nice flow.
    good write.


  • xXxtyxXx
    January 7

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    haha

    i really like your poems there vary creative i wish i could right my feelings as well as you do... GREAT JOB!!!


  • Ignis Corpus
    June 10, 2008

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    awww, That's sweet. I've had dreams like this before. That's cute. Then think, one day, the man in your dreams you'll find, and he'll fall in love with you and. [[gives a drum roll]]............ He'll do this for you. He'll be the one if you wake up at 3 in the morning and go "hey baby, I want some muffins..." drive all the way across town with a little fuss and get you your muffin and then walk through the door going, "hey baby, I'm back with your muffins, happy? Do you need anything else?" Then you go, "Apple juice." And him go all the way back to town and get you some apple juice.
    -♥-,
    Blood Princess

    • XbeautifulyXbrokenX
      June 10, 2008
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      hahaha that made my day no lie!!
      your my besty friend that can make the worst day really good!
      haha thanks so much im glad you like my poem

      love amber

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