your always on my mind
its unexplainable to why
my love for you runs so deep and wide
hoping that one day you will be here by myside
holding my hand
maybe a promise ring band
a kiss on the cheek
would make my knees go weak
telling me how much you care
you tell me "baby i love you i ill never leave i swear"
for that day came
down on one knee
he finally fell in love with me
idk just a weird dream i had
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good rhyme. nice flow.
good write.
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haha
i really like your poems there vary creative i wish i could right my feelings as well as you do... GREAT JOB!!!

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well thank you :]
but i lost him so i guess it wasnt all that great :/ haha
*ajayy
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awww, That's sweet. I've had dreams like this before. That's cute. Then think, one day, the man in your dreams you'll find, and he'll fall in love with you and. [[gives a drum roll]]............ He'll do this for you. He'll be the one if you wake up at 3 in the morning and go "hey baby, I want some muffins..." drive all the way across town with a little fuss and get you your muffin and then walk through the door going, "hey baby, I'm back with your muffins, happy? Do you need anything else?" Then you go, "Apple juice." And him go all the way back to town and get you some apple juice.
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hahaha that made my day no lie!!
your my besty friend that can make the worst day really good!
haha thanks so much im glad you like my poem
love amber
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