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A Looneristic Spimerick

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Whilst sciding along on his rooter
A boy used his captop lomputer.
He pownloaded a dage
On using road rage
As an excuse to use his shea-pooter!




Author notes

Contest: "Flutterbys and Runny Babbits"

Cinderella Dropped her Slipper
Red Lobster

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Comments

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  • Questioning?

    Hi,
    Why did you take your poem out of the contest???
    This was one of the better poems in it. We liked it a lot, and got a good laugh from it. Did we do something to affend you.
    Hopeing you reenter it.
    You have a great talent.
  • Contest

    Please re-enter this poem in my contest,
    It is one of the better ones!
    Why did you take it out anyway,
    did I mess up some how?\
    *Flutterbys & Runny Babbits*

  • KayJay46 gold member
    April 30
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    Wonderfully clever write... Bravo!
    Ken


  • moonbumps silver member
    April 29

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    Scuse me while I put my teeth back in!!!
    Wonderful write so well thoughtout and very spooneristic!!!
    Good luck-you won't need it!!
    xxx Hilly

  • Perception
    April 28

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    Oh my gosh. This is completely awesome. I love it! This is awesome! I can't stop saying it!
    Hehe... This is totally RAD! Now, now we must not be dorky.
    I really like your poem!
    Best of luck in the contest

  • Shenton
    April 28

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    Of a lady named Lou I'm in awe.
    She writes spimericks like I never saw.
    Dean Spooner would be proud
    hearing them read aloud
    whilst the audience cried out for more.

    You are morely sissed

    Shenton
    • Lady named Lou...

      You should enter the contest,
      your comment tells me that you
      could do it very easily.
  • *Awesome**

    * Exactly what we were looking for*
    Great Job! Good luck in contest...
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