he will draw you in
catch your attention
with a secret word and slight of hand
you are watching intently
following his every move
each one greater than the next
hes surrounds you in excitement
he will fill you with wonder and delight
he makes something disappear
he makes sure that youre watching
drawing you in for his finale
but you arent really watching
not the way you think
he shows you all the angles
but you dont want to see what hes really doing
you dont want to know how its done
thats what makes magic so mysterious
will it stay gone
will he bring it back
you want to see something shocking
something you have never seen before
you wait on the edge of your seat
abracadabra
Author notes
Now you're looking for the secret... but you won't find it because you're not really looking.
You don't really want to know the secret... You want to be fooled
-THE PRESTIGE
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I really liked this. And i agree with it,
it's really great, and very well written,
it definitely drew me in a lot.
I'll hopefully comment as much poems of yours as I can
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i love this it is great
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cool.
I like how it builds up to the final line and word, adracadabra. Keep up the good work!
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yay
Ahh I loved the prestige but jessica beil ruined it
loved your poem rly captured the essence of the movie^_^ good flow too
7th line should be "he"
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Haha good write. I like the illusions that magicians create with their slight of hand, and your right you really never want to know how its done cause it spoils the mystery. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
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Magic
This is REALLY different from most of your other stuff. I love the way you tell 3 stories in one.
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Very good. The quote goes well with the poem.
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