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Annual

               Through the sunshine
               comes blue as a sprinkle here and there
               like art on an easel,
               involved attentively helps the beauty.

               Spring ground opens up a flower
               in the middle of my eyes,
               splotched in shapes of rays
               that traced it's growth through winter lines.

               Carrying frost from January's bed,
               a rose blooms blending in
               while simultaneously shaking snowflakes off
               from petal's orange colors like a thermogram.

               A whirl of other budding plants, blurred
               sprout on this same ground in distance
               until discovered
               by feet feeling the soft bump of stems.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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background credit: made for me in my competition, by debilynn





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  • Ithica silver member
    May 18, 2008

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    Totally gorgeous write and presentation... Very vivid and unique imagery in this fine piece... Congrats. on the HM too!!!


  • The Green Elf
    April 29, 2008
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    wow.

    This was soooooo awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! I absolutly L-O-V-E-D it!!