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OH MY, another Birthday!!!

I heard it was that day,
so why not stay in bed,
enjoy you a lazy mornin,
be a pampered angel instead.

Take control of the tele,
watch your favorite show,
relax in a bubble bath,
soak in gentle water's flow.

As afternoon rolls around,
take in springtime's bliss,
each budding flowers beauty,
touched by a fragrant kiss.

Now evening falls upon you,
all your friends come around,
with presents, cake and ice cream,
merriment flows with the sound!

The day has cycled complete,
moon riding high in the sky,
your radiant smile beaming,
in your lovers arms you sigh...

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Happy Happy My friend, with love and warmest wishes to you on your most special of days!

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    This is just what the doctor ordered! What a delightfully wonderful day you have created. Thanks so much dear friend, this is an exceptional gift from a very sweet and talented friend.


  • DarkHunter
    May 6, 2008

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    Thank you Dave for this sweet write for Jeannie. She certainly was a pampered angel!

    Thank you for joining the party


  • LittleBee
    April 28, 2008
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    Made me feel warm and bright!

    This is such a lovely poem and written in such a way that now I cant wait for my next birthday!!!


  • Stardust-luvr
    April 28, 2008

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    my dear bro you brought a day i could even use after my day today -lol Your friend will surely enjoy a pampered day of blissful relaxation. well done and many blessings always xxxx