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A Wish for you

I wish you luck.I wish you joy,
I wish you a bouncing baby boy.
And when his hair begins to curl,
I wish you a baby girl.
And when her hair grows straight as pins,
I wish you a pair of twins.

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  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    May 11, 2008

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    Awww Now this is really cute.
    I really like this.
    I hope you know someone who is having twins that you can give this to. I am sure someone would just simply adore this.

    loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce

    good luck in my contest.


  • PoeticAlien gold member
    April 28, 2008
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    aw,
    so short and sweet.

    I like it.
    nice write.

  • I am poet
    April 28, 2008
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    Great

    Happyness,kids and love is what it's all about

    • I am poet
      October 27, 2008
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      really why thank you i have written many more poem since april and i am trying to find a publisher to publish them but so far i am afraid that they will steel it or people on will steel it because there are people like that