Theres a girl I know
whose hope can't compare
She has a face
which is always required
With all the pieces
in proper places
And the best I can do
the very best I would
is keep the smile there
all the things it comes to
Author notes
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. Plato
One of the few gifts I have to offer my loved ones is laughter and making jokes. Comedy is poetry too and that's the thoughts that came to mind.
A contest entry
- ~* Let Love In *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended May 2, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Comedy is poetry too
This piece tugged at Spirit and I was seeing the word:
model...like Cheryl Tiegs...
hearing word: resemblance
Being shown word: date
and Date Movie~~
also hearing words: mother of my baby...
being shown the female actress from the movie
Wonderful images to bring forth a smile
These lines grabbed and pulled~
Theres a girl I know
whose hope can't compare:
Beautiful take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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