hell bent infantile
juvenile delinquent innocence
extrapolating soul sadistic
sojourns in destabilized
decision making stasis
upturn faces frown
while belching baby burps
with anarchy filled
flatulent fat chances
A contest entry
- bad kids by Deathless1.
450 points, ended May 8, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh my goodness
In this world and the teachings today where children untaught of life have children of their own its truly sad for they have no idea how to care and protect the child . Who is to blame the child or the parents .I say the parents for they were the teachers and by letting their young run wild a child has passed needlesly for none were taught that child also was their own life passing
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Thanks, great comment.
a proper upbringing
determining
factor of fate
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You really left me wanting more. and the last two line are good enough to quote. thanks for entering.
KNIGHT TIME
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