I've had enough of all of this
I just want to give up and quit
I don't know what to do any more
I feel so used and so worn
It seems useless to go on
But i know i have to stay strong
Even when times get rough
But right now it seems
I've had enough
Author notes
written on 9/27/04
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i want to give up but i can't i can't disapoint and live down all expectations of me crown i must suit up in armor even if i know i will die i must protect me country and its citesens rights. not to mention all who have already given their lifes i must stay strong and die in this fight.
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hopeful
... and the beautiful irony is... that hope resides in the depths of despair... that things can instantly turn around... that opportunity shines in the deepest crevices. Hang in there, one day you will be glad it was so hard, as you help pull others out. Do me a favor and go read my piece, "The Party's Over" - if you understand what it says, you will have the authority to change things. I wish you the best, and I expect great things from you. You are a talented writer - Kevin
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This poem really hit home for me, I feel like that almost everyday. Perfectly written, well done
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I know the feeling. Wow that poem really is old! Four years ago. Geeze so much has changed...right? heh. j/k
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