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Remedy

There’s not enough warmth in my hands,
Not enough, bounce in my step,
But coffee will make it better.
There’s not enough joy in my eyes,
Not enough strength, for a smile,
But coffee will make it better.
There’s not enough thoughts in my mind,
Not enough, feeling to find,
But coffee will make it better.
There’s not enough life in my soul,
Not enough heart for this hole,
But coffee will make it better.
Now my hands start to shake,
And my mind starts to buzz,
But coffee, makes everything better.

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I am guessing that if when you need comphort you cling desperately to a pot of coffee one cup at a time it means you have an addiction..

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  • diruparadise
    May 1, 2008

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    very interesting! it seems that u can fill the word "coffee" in w/ any kind of addiction such as alcohol, cigarettes or something. i like it. it really is how life is. you use other things to fill in the holes in ur life that are missing. luv u woman!!


    • Mori-lux
      May 1, 2008
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      Yeah that was clear to me while I was experimenting with this poem. Thankfully my addiction realy is coffee. Thank you I'm glad you liked it. <3 I miss you.