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Life

Sorrow, pain, sadness
All these years
Filled with nothing but madness
All my sanity taken away
Along with everything else i feel
Because of that day
Trying to heal
Not working out
What do i do
Besides sit here and shout
About how i miss you
And how i need a new life
Because the one i have now
Has been filled with strife

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  • PoeticAlien gold member
    April 28, 2008
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    very simple,
    but very relative,

    reminds me of some of my older writes.

    nicely done.