Someone to care for me
When i feel sad
Just one little action
And for this im glad
You keep me going
Even when i wanna give up
You stole my heart
When i realized it wasn't just lust
Author notes
4/8/04
A contest entry
- Really?no way! [Anyone anywhere] by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
375 points, ended June 28, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very cute.. Its short/ sweet but you made the point you were trying to make. It was worded so well. my favorite part was when you said "Just one little action And for this im glad" i liked that alot. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck
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