You, with your face
of pure Heaven and
the light of your
soul warms my heart
On this cold, winter
night and this dark
empty street has no
hope for the lonely
So, please, as I stand
here with my arms open
wide, I ask you to let
me inside and love you
like never before
Author notes
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Artist Unknown...Sorry
In a list
A contest entry
- ~* Let Love In *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended May 2, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Let Me Inside...
This piece tugged at the Heartstrings and felt a surge
of energy as if while You were writing this...
a tide of Love washed over You
Seeing an ivory flower...unable to name it to save
my life...sorry but its a tropical type of flower...
feels associated to the Hawaiian Islands...
Also hearing the word: Officer...like in Officer and a
Gentleman...
Wonderful images to feed the Heart
These lines grabbed and pulled~
You, with your face
of pure Heaven...
Beautiful take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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