Suicide thoughts dance in my head,
and I see your face when I close my eyes.
Cutting deeper and deeper into my arm,
Your name runs through my mind while I sit here and cry.
Blood pools around where I lay,
While the tears flow like never before.
My mind is full, my heart is breaking,
And this pain runs deep into my core.
The light is blinding,
I am tryin to let go.
I think about how you did me wrong,
and how you hurt me so.
But whatever it is i think about,
I keep hanging on to what we had.
My heart shatters to pieces,
And inside I am sad.
I want to let it all go,
Even though I know I never will.
So I will lay here and think about you,
and live like my life is standing still
I was thinking about someone that hurt me
Comments
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my first impression is that you've moved on but still haven't let go. work on getting your feelings out and letting people know how you feel about them. great poem and i look forward to reading more from you


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wow this is very good I give you credit for dealing with that but if her came back would you go back...? just think things arent always as nice as the first time around.. I went through the same thing if you ever wanna talk let me know Great write
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