Is this for real? Is this true?
I really do believe it is...
some things just can't be denied
I felt it in your kiss the first time our lips touched;
I sense you deep within my being
I want you to follow your heart
for I know your heart will lead you to my awaiting arms
Yes, come with me; I will take you to a place you could never see
I will give you what you so richly deserve
All you have to do is come...
Come with me; let love in and let's share Heaven on Earth
A contest entry
- ~* Let Love In *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended May 2, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold IV - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended May 6, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent
Oh my a heaven on earth to be sure. So full of love and the things that do create paradise. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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Welcome!!
Beautiful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Heaven on Earth
This piece tugged at the Heartstrings and felt the
word: Precious~ leave my lips
For some reason seeing a gondola...
and hearing a song sung by Pavarotti~
Wow, now I normally read a piece several times
and while I was reading this again...
Was seeing Carmen Electra...
from the movie: Epic Movie
Very Interesting indeed also remember Pokemon...
seeing Pikachu
Wonderful images to bring a smile
These lines grabbed and pulled~
I sense you deep within my being
I want you to follow your heart
Beautiful take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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wowwwwwww
what a wonderful write of love, and the invitation of grand love to share. excellent.
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awwww
this is pretty.
I hope you are well.
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SUCH SUBTLE, SWEET PASSION!!!
The tender yearning of ones heart as they lie so softly in their loved ones arms.'s
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Lovely
Precious take on the wonderful prompt
you have captured them meaning of "true love" very well. It is a pleasure to wake up reading such a heart-warming piece.
your write brought me many as love should.
I wish you the best in the contest.
Much love
David
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Very Good
I sense you deep within my being
I want you to follow your heart
for I know your heart will lead you to my awaiting arms
Lovely words
Liked it from begining to end
Rick
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Sandy:
You are very special and it shows in your writings.....
The way you describe your feelings is deep and thought provoking.....
Love comes into our lives once, if we're lucky it might strike again..... As [er this piece!
Enjoy life, and love forever.....
Blessed be with love, life and all things good always.....
Your friend,
AngelicMistress...Tanya
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Glad you let the love in your heart dance with the joy of meeting someone you can share it with. Wonderfully stated. Sorry for such a short note but my left eye is very light sensative and I can only stand the strain of focusing for so long. Keep up the good work. All the best.
Love,
Tom B.
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Beautiful
You have such a loving heart and sweet soul.. It shows with each write I read from you. Keep on letting your light shine, though I know it's not always easy to do so, you do it well. Thanks for sharing, love your brother, Timothy
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BREATH TAKING
Such a sweet invitation to the one you love...pulls the reader in and just holds you there...sighs...'Come with me' the promise of Heaven on Earth...winner wrote all over it niaish so much for sharing it with me
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