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you have no idea,
i'm not playing a game.
you're the one that said,
you didn't wanna be the same.


you asked for the truth,
and i gave it to you.
then you got all pissed,
and said 'well fuck you too'


you're gonna be a bitch,
so i'm gonna be one too.
say you're sorry,
and maybe i'll say it too.


but if you're not,
then just leave me alone.
don't say a word,
and quit being my clone.


i guess i'll see you later,
and probly talk to you never.
unless you talk it out.
otherwise, then whatever.

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ahhhh! ppl annoy me!

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  • HeatherXx
    June 14, 2008

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    wow. this is some stuff. wow. i wonder who you are talking about ? wow. do you still feel this way?

    we have not talked in like FOREVER. i miss ya liz,
    love,
    heather.


    WELL WRITTEN.


  • jessicams
    May 8, 2008

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    made me think

    Thank you for sharing this poem, it left me pondering relationships, and I find it very thought provoking.


  • XRainbowliciousX
    April 28, 2008
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    wow. yeah.


  • Danneh
    April 28, 2008

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    ..Capitalization and not putting punctuation at the end of each line not seem so immature. The thing is, a lot of kids are clones.. They rather enjoy it, and when you try to tell them to be otherwise, they get pissed.

    -Danneh<3

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