For allowing me the great tide of blessings
you saw fit to bless me with.
And
Guiding me through the rough times of my life,
teaching me to survive without falling into
the clutches of evil. In spite of my weak
nature you're always there to forgive me and
protect me as long as I have faith.
And for that I thank you everytime I pray
to praise your holy name...
Author notes
We all have to give thanks to him of the most high...
A contest entry
- Short Form Spirituals by Samplette.
600 points, ended May 13, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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I like this. I guess you are using your title as your first line. In the 6th line, your should be you're, other than that, a very nice entry. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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Amen to that my friend.
xxx Hilly




